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Believe in you

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They say, you're a dreamer,
and worth nothing at all.
They claim you're a screamer,
who wails at the wall.

They tell you to shut up,
be one with the crowd.
Drink all from the same cup,
oh, and please cease to shout.

But what does it matter,
what the others may say?
It's not for the better,
to fade in the grey.

Stand up to them proudly,
and confront them with zeal.
Laugh at them loudly,
and then watch them squeal.

Cause I for one, believe in you.
Believe in the dreams you instilled.
Now tell me please, why don't you too?
Keep on believing and you'll be thrilled.
I put this 'poem' together in order to encourage my girlfriend to believe in herself, no matter what others may say to and about her. I don't think it's that good, but I'd still like your opinions on it. Thank you very much.
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locodela's avatar
This is a wonderful poem! I'm just starting to trudge into the literature part of DA and I think I'm going to like it a lot if your works have anything to say for it!
As I was reading it a thought kept popping into my head. . . :
"This would make a really good song!"
XD
Anyways love it great job! Your girlfriends super lucky!!